英语底子明明就不差，可是写出来的作文分数总是很低。平常该积累的单词、短语一直没有落下，语法也没有问题，就是一到作文就不对了，影响着整个英语试卷的成绩。这是什么原因造成的呢？

在我多年的教学实践中，很多学生英语底子都很好，往往在作文方面差强人意。我总结了一下出现这种情况的最大原因在于：写作思路不够清晰，用词、造句总是单一地选择自己最初学的句子，最明显的就是只要是遇到说明文，普遍采用“主系表”、“主谓宾”结构，整篇文章读下来“It is......”“He always......”等句子占据了全部内容。

我曾经教过的精英班一个学生就是这种情况，在我给她指出问题所在并告诉她解决办法后，果然英语水平突飞猛进，作文从以前的一位数得分变成了次次被老师作为范文在全班品读。

所以，同学们作文分数上不去就要从别处找原因了，自己的实力不用怀疑，可能是自己没有对文章加以修饰，表达方法还不够有特色，这里，我总结了写好英语作文开头的六大对策，供大家学习。

先引出其他人的不同看法，然后提出自己的看法或者偏向于某一看法，适用于有争议性的主题。

[1] When asked about..., the vast/overwhelming majority of people say that…. But I think/view a bit differently.

[2] When it comes to ...., some people believe that…. Others argue/claimthat the opposite/reverse is true. There is probably some truth in botharguments/statements, but I tend to the former/latter.

[3] Now, it is commonly/generally/widely believed/held/acknowledgedthat..... They claim/ believe/argue that ... But I wonder/doubt whether.....

引出要剖析的现象或者问题，然后评论。

[1] Recently the rise in the problem/phenomenon of ... has cause/arousedpublic/popular/wide/ worldwide concern.

[2] Recently the issue of the problem/phenomenon of ...has been broughtinto focus/into public attention.

[3] Inflation/Corruption/Social inequality ... is yet another of the newand bitter truth we have to learn to face now/constantly.

开门见山，直接了当地提出自己对要讨论的问题的看法。

[1] Now people in growing/significant numbers are beginning/coming torealize/accept/(be aware) that...

[2] Now there is a(n) growing awareness/recognition of the necessityto....

[3] Now people become increasingly aware/conscious of the importance of....

[4] Perhaps it is time to have a fresh look at the attitude/idea that....

先引出名人名言或者有代表性的看法，来引出文章要展开论述的观点!

[1] "Knowledge is power." This is the remark made by Bacon. Thisremark has been shared by more and more people.

[2] "Education is not complete with graduation." This is theopinion of a great American philosopher. Now more and more people share hisopinion.

[3] "...." We often hear statements/words like those/this.

[4] We often hear such traditional complains as this "....".

通过对过去、现在两种不同的倾向、观点的比较，引出文章要讨论的观点。

[1] For years, ...had been viewed as .... But people are taking a freshlook now. With the growing ..., people ....

[2] People used to think that ... (In the past, ....) But people now sharethis new idea.

先讲一个较短的故事来引发读者的兴趣，引出文章的主题。少用!

[1] Once in (a newspaper), I read of/learnt..... The phenomenon of ... hasaroused public concern.

[2] I have a friend who ... Should he ....? Such a dilemma we are oftenconfronted with in our daily life.

[3]Once upon a time, there lived a man who .... This story may be(unbelievable), but it still has a realistic significance now.

看了这些，同学们不妨花一点时间去这些例句记下来，将这些比较有特色的句子和写作方法运用到自己的作文中去，成为自己的内容，相信能为你的作文布满亮点。要想写作更上一层楼还得花时间去模仿好文章，以达到从量变到质变的过程。

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